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Jinpo

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#87

05-25-2007, 02:03 AM

Zangya: Your post with the flashback was pretty good. I liked the language used and the background information to Zangya's anger. However, I feel the non-flashback piece of the post is a little short.

Here's my post that I want C&C on: Day One: Morning

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