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[Nori]

Originally posted by Bujin

Originally posted by Bujin
@ Zangya

Good for you, still plowing forth even though half your freakin' face got blown off. It was a pretty simple post, basically explaining how super-pissed Zangya was, but your descriptions were adequate and it flowed pretty well. I'm generally not a fan of flashbacks, and having not read a lot of your stuff, it didn't mean a whole lot. However, it wasn't too random and it fit with the rest of the post. So...well done.

Mine: Link

Don't skip mine.

I liked your post because it fit the war like appitude that is Dante. A good visual of the surroundings, as well as a interesting conversation that went on in your head between multiple personalities. It was different, although I'v read the multiple personalities in the head before.

However there just seemed to be a little bit lacking. It was interesting, but nothing that really *consumed* me. Nothing that will make me come back for more next time you post.

No C&C for me.