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05-25-2007, 04:29 AM

Quote:Originally posted by Retane
I enjoyed it. It was quite interesting and funny. Every bit of it was. It could have been longer I guess, as i think it was cut to short, but other then that, I dont know what to say.

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I read your first one.

Good description in your writing, I'm a big fan of description and your post held me just to see the words you used for detailing the situation. The only thing that annoyed me was several spots where grammar and spelling were lacking. I realise that's not important to everyone, but it kinda irks me.

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