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05-25-2007, 01:07 PM

Very good. You show Buu's character without hinderance; from that limited sample I can tell that Buu is frustrated easily and has a sense of simple joy. His happiness over the sword and his unique decision to forge a bell were entertaining. Not much I can say wrong about it. He swears a fair bit, but I'm sure that's just part of his character.

Just keep up what you're doing, keep your hooks going (bring bring) and I'll keep enjoying your writing.

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