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05-25-2007, 08:53 PM
@Rad:

Nice job. The humor in it was absolutely wonderful, and my favorite part was reading the fight between "Raditzu" and "Vegeta". I just couldn't help thinking it was funny. Also, the flashbacks that were mixed in seemed slightly out of place, but perhaps it'll become more clear why Rad is in the principal's office. They didn't work for me, but if you perfect them, I think they could work quite well. Overall, 9/10.

Now someone please do me. I love this post.

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