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Originally posted by Raditzu
I'll take one if you're handing them out.

Day Two: Early Morning

Thanks.

Lol. The end made me laugh, because I could totally visualize Rad passionately thrusting his index forward and closing an eye for suspense--like an anime pose after a victory. My favorite thing about this post--and all of your writing, for that matter--is your strong character. He's simply awesome. Now, onto the actual post, which for the last sentence I've been eluding.

It was a nice read; very refreshing after reading the seriousness of the last three. I think I'll be reading more of your work in-between reading Stephen King and my friend's works here.

Not many errors--if any. A little vague in description, but the strength of the character completely overlaps that. I also noticed that you didn't use any words over a 8th grade reading level really, and I actually enjoyed that. I don't really like going to Dictionary.com while reading. It was great!

For it was worth: 9/10


The only reason I gave it that score is because I considered what I gave Supes. And it wasn't really any better than Supes, just different, and I am trying to keep away give objective c&c, which is hard considering the varying styles of writing on Chubbs.