06-01-2007, 02:40 AM
EH I meant to post that if GOkua didn't get to him, like Ithoguht he was still doing then I would whenI got back.... But anyways.
Kol, it was interesting, and funny. Had you not left you woulda made it alot further. I woulda liked it more cept, I never read it and saw the OOC about it. I tihnk one of the sentances was a bit incorrect, but it might just be me. Yoou seperated two sentances when it shoulda been one or had a few more words in it.
ALl and all, it was great. I can't think anything wrong with it. I'm going to hope you saw Celipa b4 though... lol Thats my only worry. Like I said that was the first Rp I read of yours
Kol, it was interesting, and funny. Had you not left you woulda made it alot further. I woulda liked it more cept, I never read it and saw the OOC about it. I tihnk one of the sentances was a bit incorrect, but it might just be me. Yoou seperated two sentances when it shoulda been one or had a few more words in it.
ALl and all, it was great. I can't think anything wrong with it. I'm going to hope you saw Celipa b4 though... lol Thats my only worry. Like I said that was the first Rp I read of yours
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Reb: ya know
Reb: I think you're a fucking moron OOC
Reb: but I have to hand it to you
Reb: you've turned into a really good writer

