06-02-2007, 03:07 AM
Quote:Originally posted by Cargo
Retane: It's definitely good to see this side of Retane. It breaks it up, you know. There were a few spelling errors (concious-conscious, releived-relieved), but those could obviously be corrected with spellcheck. Also:
Quote:Originally posted by Retane
The dark namekian wished it was noon, he didn't care even if it was the time of the height of the suns glory.
The second part of that setence didn't make sentence to me, but I could be wrong. Overall, I enjoyed the post and look forward to your roleplays in the future.
Rating: 8/10
My RP: Day Three: Morning
Meh... Yeesh. Retane hates light. Noon = no shadow..the peak of the sun.
First and current League Champion: Holder of the Torrent badge of Earth.
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Reb: ya know
Reb: I think you're a fucking moron OOC
Reb: but I have to hand it to you
Reb: you've turned into a really good writer
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Reb: ya know
Reb: I think you're a fucking moron OOC
Reb: but I have to hand it to you
Reb: you've turned into a really good writer

