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06-04-2007, 03:34 AM
It was tasteful, and had that linger of humor all throughout it. I liked how you mentioned the fact that he did his best to fix the injuries, yet mentioned they weren't truley fixed or healed as well. If you wanted it longer you coulda described the mending process a bit, but to much woulda made it boring I guess. Great job is all I can say.
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