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[Jinpo]

Since we are working together, I feel like I should give you my opinion on things. In reference to that particular post, I thought it was well done. First of all, I don't think you needed the opening narratory thing. To me, it seemed like you tacked it on to make the post longer. I got the point of the post without it. Otherwise, I like it and the storyline in general. I feel that you are pretty consistent with the character. He is getting more and more childlike in his madness and it is interesting to read. Just make sure that you don't make Seventeen too crazy.

My RP: Day Five: Early Morning

I appreciate it if you could look over and critique both of my Early Morning posts, but if you only want to do one, I'd pick that one first.