nappa

[Android 17]

That's only 276, but still an all right effort.

You got a few big problems.

First of all: Spelling errors. What do you type in? Notepad? Wordpage? The post reply box? >_> Do you have MS Word on your PC?

Second: Paragraphs. You need to start a new paragraph each time someone new talks. A paragraph is when you hit enter twice and then start typing again. You also start new paragraphs whenever the action of the current paragraph shifts.

Third: Capitalization. Capitalize the first word of a sentence and all proper nouns. That means anything that follows a period (.), exclamation mark (!), or question mark (?)/

Four: Don't use "||" <_<

Break that block of text into paragraphs and try and fix your errors, all right? And answer my question please.