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[Android 17]

Originally posted by Android 17
You got a few big problems.

First of all: Spelling errors. What do you type in? Notepad? Wordpage? The post reply box? >_> Do you have MS Word on your PC?

Second: Paragraphs. You need to start a new paragraph each time someone new talks. A paragraph is when you hit enter twice and then start typing again. You also start new paragraphs whenever the action of the current paragraph shifts.

Third: Capitalization. Capitalize the first word of a sentence and all proper nouns. That means anything that follows a period (.), exclamation mark (!), or question mark (?)/

Four: Don't use "||" <_<

Break that block of text into paragraphs and try and fix your errors, all right? And answer my question please.

Still have to fix all those problems.

Do you have MS Word? If not, go to http://www.spellchecker.net/v2/products/scayt.html and use that page to fix your spelling errors.