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[Kazuya]

I have noticed that recently my posts have been losing focus, slowly, progressively losing that touch since I began here. Reviewing some of my older Rp's I have tried to thrust myself back into that state of mind, keeping the focus on Vi's character development instead of character relationships..and I believe I may have created something cool.


http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...post210940

My latest post. I have busted out something that has probably been one of my better RP's lately. If I can get some C&C or just comments on this, that will help me see if I am on the right track again.

thanks guys!

Vi