C&C on my current progress

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C&C on my current progress

Ander

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04-22-2006, 05:58 AM

You are most assuredly no longer confused. In fact, I like your writing even better the way it is now. Way to improve. There are still a few errors (mostly punctuational), but I can overlook them. I gotta say, you've become one of my favorite reads. Your character is very anti-hero, which is becoming pretty commonplace these days, but I like him.

[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]

_=So wake me when it's through
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_

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C&C on my current progress - by Blue - 03-23-2006, 09:56 PM

C&C on my current progress - by Ander - 03-30-2006, 09:18 AM

C&C on my current progress - by Blue - 03-30-2006, 10:15 PM

C&C on my current progress - by Blue - 03-30-2006, 10:20 PM

C&C on my current progress - by Kazuya - 03-30-2006, 10:26 PM

C&C on my current progress - by Ander - 04-06-2006, 10:03 AM

C&C on my current progress - by Blue - 04-19-2006, 12:06 AM

C&C on my current progress - by Ander - 04-22-2006, 05:58 AM

C&C on my current progress - by Blue - 04-24-2006, 08:13 PM