i need some C&C

[Ander]

Originally posted by Captain Silver
OOC: Filled with spelling errors

You are definitely right about that, "mah boy." You could always use this when in doubt. I strongly recommend that you download Word or use a library computer or something.

As an aside, way to keep trying. The last person to successfully get Spiritken was Bebi, I believe, and he cranked out a fifteen-poster chock full of plotty goodness before he got it. So, just keep plugging away.

Love for someone else is an admirable reason to fight, but you need a more convincing reason than that. Selflessness is dandy and all, but what about Silver? I think you should go a little more in depth with him. There's got to be something else you can use besides "I need the power to protect Cara!" you sappy, sappy man. I mean that will all due respect. Otherwise, Yamu's pretty much got you covered.