04-26-2006, 10:33 AM
Added the "Show, Don't Tell" section, revised "Capitalization" to include dialogue examples, added a link to a site that lets you download Microsoft Word (for 99 cents), and finally took out a bit in "Starting Off" about Nameks beginning with Mystic Attack (the one where they stretch). I realized it was a technique you had to learn, so it was fixed. Super Buu noticed and pointed it out to me.
Once more, could somebody please copy/paste the changes to the join forum when they have time? Thanks in advance.
Once more, could somebody please copy/paste the changes to the join forum when they have time? Thanks in advance.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
_=So wake me when it's through
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_

