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[Kazuya]

I love you for life, now, Bardock


You are right, it does sound rather Kill Bill-ish. I am a huge fan of that movie, and using some of the elements to get me started in the beginning when I joined here just og thte ball rolling for me to write Vi. Call it inspiration, or whatnot, I don't mind. I just thought it was kick ass in the beginning.

The colored parts of that post was a chunk from an earlier post (In fact, I believe it was the second roleplay I have done here, waaaaaay back in my Dreams thread. I could have fixed it when I wrote that post, but I was rather torn on whether I should keep it original, or fix it and have some inconsistencies or whatnot.

I am usually a first person perspective writer, I am not much for third person, but Chubbs is helping out with that lil bit. Basically, I use [....] as it is my own style, the only real thing I can do visually to put my signature in there. I try and make it seem that one bit leads on to the next, but there may be a better way of doing this, and I am a bitch for grammar and punctuation. ^_^

Thank you, B. I really appreciate you taking time out to read my posts. You don't know how much it makes me happy to know someone enjoys my writing, even if it may have its flaws.


-Vi