05-16-2006, 09:22 PM
http://cdbzrpg.dracondev.com/forum/threa...post211896
My second-to-most recent post. Since this is pretty much characteristic of my focused style (as opposed to some of the shorter roleplays I write, which are mostly devoid of the perspectives of those other than Krillin), I was interested in knowing what the whole of Chubbs thinks I need to improve on. Including Bardock. =D
If you would, I'd greatly appreciate it. DA is coming up, and I need to know where I can improve.
My second-to-most recent post. Since this is pretty much characteristic of my focused style (as opposed to some of the shorter roleplays I write, which are mostly devoid of the perspectives of those other than Krillin), I was interested in knowing what the whole of Chubbs thinks I need to improve on. Including Bardock. =D
If you would, I'd greatly appreciate it. DA is coming up, and I need to know where I can improve.
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