05-18-2006, 01:55 AM
I think I told you this before, but that whole post right there was brilliant. It's actually one of my favorite posts on here, because it has the tiniest things Krillin does affect so many people so dramatically. Especially the Girl Scouts. That one had me laughing out loud.
Seriously, I think that post right there is the near the best you've ever written. I'd love to be able to think up some of that stuff in my writing, and make it both funny, realistic and believable. If you need some more "in depth" C&C I'll go paragraph by paragraph, but this is my general thoughts as an overview.
Seriously, I think that post right there is the near the best you've ever written. I'd love to be able to think up some of that stuff in my writing, and make it both funny, realistic and believable. If you need some more "in depth" C&C I'll go paragraph by paragraph, but this is my general thoughts as an overview.
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