06-02-2006, 02:23 AM
My first impression is that you can make a coherent sentence. That's good.
However, I need more material to go off of than that, since you're new.
Maybe somebody else might be willing to share their opinion. That'd be great.
However, I need more material to go off of than that, since you're new.
Maybe somebody else might be willing to share their opinion. That'd be great.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
_=So wake me when it's through
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_