06-13-2006, 05:02 AM
This is something of a different side of Bra, and yet you still remain very grounded in the character you've established. She is incredibly manic, the kind that makes you step back and say, 'Whoa.'
While it may be dark like you say, it's a completely legitimate reaction to the things that have happened. I like the carry-over you keep using of Raditzu's behavior rubbing off on Bra, and she keeps correcting herself. It's a slow integration of change, but a funny one.
In summation, a good read as always. Way to work the empathy factor.
While it may be dark like you say, it's a completely legitimate reaction to the things that have happened. I like the carry-over you keep using of Raditzu's behavior rubbing off on Bra, and she keeps correcting herself. It's a slow integration of change, but a funny one.
In summation, a good read as always. Way to work the empathy factor.
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
_=So wake me when it's through
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_