06-14-2006, 06:21 PM
Quote:Originally posted by Bardock
Quote:Originally posted by Toma
Quote:The sun was glowing it's usual golden glimmer.
It just sounds...awkward...too many words starting with g in one sentence.
Actually, that sentence is perfectly fine the way it is, barring the "it's." The 'g-g-g' is alliteration, which is actually a very successful tool in drawing attention to the writing. Don't change it.
You're right, it may be the fact that I'm not born english.
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