08-09-2006, 11:52 AM
Bric-a-brac? The only person I've ever known to use that phrase lived in a shanty. Oh, the memories.
I don't know how to say this better, but nice reverse development. In Buu's past, he speaks crudely and is mostly ruled by instinct and emotion. This shows he's evolved, a lot. Most people trip up when they're trying to scoop out a good past, and they end up contradicting their future or are forced to retcon to adjust for a sudden change they've made.
Also, when people try to explain the past, they do so only at very poignant moments that has immediate relevance to the present, but usually always do so as concisely as possible, so ping-ponging back and forth with full posts shows that you either have no life or pay a lot of attention to backstories. Possibly both. Your transitions are smooth.
Creative incorporation of dialect, using 'thee' and 'thou' and good old stuff like that, but very Shakespearian, so it's a hit or miss decision depending if people are able to get through it.
A lot of your apostrophes are backwards.
Everybody loves albinos.
You sick, morbid person. Bodies. EVERYWHERE. Can't give the kid a break. >=(
Quote:Originally written by Super BuuXD
?If it ain?t the cunt ?imself!?
I don't know how to say this better, but nice reverse development. In Buu's past, he speaks crudely and is mostly ruled by instinct and emotion. This shows he's evolved, a lot. Most people trip up when they're trying to scoop out a good past, and they end up contradicting their future or are forced to retcon to adjust for a sudden change they've made.
Also, when people try to explain the past, they do so only at very poignant moments that has immediate relevance to the present, but usually always do so as concisely as possible, so ping-ponging back and forth with full posts shows that you either have no life or pay a lot of attention to backstories. Possibly both. Your transitions are smooth.
Creative incorporation of dialect, using 'thee' and 'thou' and good old stuff like that, but very Shakespearian, so it's a hit or miss decision depending if people are able to get through it.
A lot of your apostrophes are backwards.
Everybody loves albinos.
You sick, morbid person. Bodies. EVERYWHERE. Can't give the kid a break. >=(
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
_=So wake me when it's through
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_
I don't want to feel the things that you do
Don't worry, I'll be fine
I just don't want this dream, wake me up inside=_

