09-14-2006, 02:13 AM
There were a few instances where you used the wrong word, or added something that wasn't supposed to be there, however, putting minute details aside I liked it. Did you really make G-d go away?
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C & C on some writing.
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C & C on some writing. - by Jinpo - 09-13-2006, 10:28 PM
C & C on some writing. - by Sullivan - 09-14-2006, 12:57 AM
C & C on some writing. - by Aiden - 09-14-2006, 01:01 AM
C & C on some writing. - by Jewtastic - 09-14-2006, 02:13 AM
C & C on some writing. - by Sol - 09-14-2006, 02:21 AM
C & C on some writing. - by Jinpo - 09-14-2006, 02:25 AM
C & C on some writing. - by Jewtastic - 09-14-2006, 02:39 AM
C & C on some writing. - by Rose - 09-14-2006, 04:06 AM
C & C on some writing. - by Jinpo - 09-14-2006, 04:49 PM
C & C on some writing. - by Jinpo - 09-23-2006, 12:24 AM
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