10-31-2006, 01:21 PM
It reminds of King Solomon (not that I have read the Bible, but who hasn't heard half of the stories, and Jackie justgave a synopsis of what I am referring to) in the fact that the author hints that the baby was pulled in half, or at least hurt by the pulling on both sides.
I agree with Rad, though, that it is not about love for the baby. I didn't really find it moving. I like stories with negative endings, and I should as a Canadian writer, or so my English teacher tells me, but that's left too open to be purely negative, although I do like its openness there.
I agree with Rad, though, that it is not about love for the baby. I didn't really find it moving. I like stories with negative endings, and I should as a Canadian writer, or so my English teacher tells me, but that's left too open to be purely negative, although I do like its openness there.
"We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl."
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