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When You Wish...
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11-07-2006, 07:16 PM
It might be a little early to ask for critiques after one post and all, but I thought that I should get it started anyway.
LINK Myself, I felt like I was trying too hard to stretch it out, and I have no idea if the beginning "grabbed" anyone. So yeah. What do you guys think? ![[Image: Bellesig6-1.jpg]](http://i238.photobucket.com/albums/ff137/catseye543/Bellesig6-1.jpg) |
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When You Wish... - by Belle Hibiki - 11-07-2006, 07:16 PM
When You Wish... - by Rose - 11-07-2006, 07:56 PM
When You Wish... - by Belle Hibiki - 11-14-2006, 03:22 AM
When You Wish... - by Belle Hibiki - 12-05-2006, 02:00 AM
When You Wish... - by Juno - 06-06-2008, 05:39 AM
When You Wish... - by Piper Juunanagou - 06-06-2008, 05:46 AM
When You Wish... - by Juno - 06-06-2008, 05:48 AM
When You Wish... - by Belle Hibiki - 06-06-2008, 05:58 AM
When You Wish... - by Juno - 06-06-2008, 06:08 AM
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