11-07-2006, 07:56 PM
Damn you, I was trying to save reading this for some far-off indulgence. Now I'm going to be antsy until you write the next post. </Subliminal messaging>
As always, my favourite part is the brilliant narration. It manages to keep the story interesting without being obstructive (as I, among others, have often done, by adding gigantic paragraphs of narration). In terms of the story, there's not much to comment on yet, but it's certainly piqued my curiosity. You've really set things up and got people salivating for the second post. Gud jaerb.
Now I have but one thing to say: more plz
As always, my favourite part is the brilliant narration. It manages to keep the story interesting without being obstructive (as I, among others, have often done, by adding gigantic paragraphs of narration). In terms of the story, there's not much to comment on yet, but it's certainly piqued my curiosity. You've really set things up and got people salivating for the second post. Gud jaerb.
Now I have but one thing to say: more plz
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