12-06-2006, 02:35 AM
Well it set the background of the RPing to come for a bit, that was nice. Detail seemed good. I had no problem becoming bored while reading it.Obviouslt I have nothing bad to say about the RP. Cept after the italicized 'perfect, maybe a comma should go there?
Here's Retane:
Ties of Death
Here's Retane:
Ties of Death
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Reb: ya know
Reb: I think you're a fucking moron OOC
Reb: but I have to hand it to you
Reb: you've become a really great writer

