Rate the Person Above's Roleplays

[Alura]

Last person was Piccolo


I give you a 6. I've seen better, but your improving and I like the character development

[Alura]

8, pretty much the same as you told me, except you could use longer roleplays usually. I can understand some short roleplays but you've been slacking on the length lately

[Old Dave]

^yeah an 8 is good for you...you can really roleplay when your in the mood to do so.

[Alura]

8.5, better then when Freiza was Zarbon.

I cant rate you higher till I see you in different situations

[Tami]

6.5, from what I've seen. I haven't had time to look at past rps which I've heard were good

The latest I've seen are too short to be that good

[Kaden]

With a 3 being proper punctuation, spelling, and cohesiveness, I would give teh brit a 6.

Oh the scale that the rest of you seem to be using, that would be somewhere around 8.25-ish.

[Alura]

I've already rated Pic, so I wont.


I'm just posting to say stop rating the same people twice, when you've rated them, they dont need the same opinion again, they want more.

Next person rate Pic, not me

[Sage]

I'll give Piccolo a 6. Your stuff is interesting, and your Piccolo isn't a carbon-copy of the one from DBZ, which is good.

EDIT: You could boost your rating easily with more substance/length.

[Alura]

9.

I can honestly say your the only person I have read EVERY post you have ever done.

Freakin amazing shit, Bra. Especcially cause you use Burter good too 8)

[Kaden]

Someone else rate mine, I had already asked brit to rate me in that other thread.

[Alura]

Burter gets a solid 8.3, cause they are good, not great, but good.

8.3 is great.

What you were saying, is I should have gotten a 5 or 6.



Rad...9. Excellent stuff, only suggestions are more details and you'll go up to perfect 10

[Sage]

BWAHAHAHA!!!

You get an 8.5. Mainly because you've given so much depth to your character. And you wrote the entire storyline for FoF, which was very engaging. Plus, Burter chills with Bra, and that makes him cool.

[Rem-13]

EDITED

Wrong person

8 for teh freeze, everything that needs to be said has been said about him.

[Abel]

7.5 Good Description and length. I enjoy reading your posts.

[Alura]

Pikkon, your supposed to rate the person above, thus you needed to rate Tapion.

Anyway, Pikkon, you've improved ALOT but your still not as good as I'd like to see. Thus, I'll give you a 4 for bad grammer and depth, BUT you are getting alot better

[James]

Ehm... I gib u a gooood 6. Mostly because of the writing's main focus as well as not relating characters to their race, like describing them more such as someone like... Guldo here, you can say something like "Little green runt" or "Trio eyed", someone can use those and relate to him. But all's good from what I see besides that.

[James]

Originally posted by Nail
It won't let me edit

Wouldn't let me ether ><

[Alexander Trafford]

Hmm Pikkon, I'm gonna give u a 6-ish, There is a grammer problem.. But from when you started to where u are now.. very good improvement.. Keep up the good work green man

[Rem-13]

Id give j00 a 7.5ish My suggestion would be to RP you enviroment more, give your reader a better sense of were they and your character is. I need to take my own advice as well.

[Rem-13]

6ish... maybe 6.5
You have improved since we worked "in Indina Who?" a while back. My suggestion would be... as always... give more details, specifically your enviroment. Make me feel as if Im there.