Rateage!

[Hellfighter 17]

I was wondering if somebody could tell me how good I did on my last post, I think it is the first good one I have ever done, so I need some feedback.

Other people can also us ethsi for feedback, so it can go on and on as long as people give helpful criticism to thsoe who want it.

[Android-18]

What do you guys think of my RPing? I'm not even trying yet...

Yeah I suggest making shorter paragraphs HF ^^.

[Hellfighter 17]

Yea, I guess I could have seperated them a bit more, I just got to into that post to think to do that. So anything else?

I liked your second post, 18, it seemed to have more in it to me. But yea I could tell you weren't trying your best after the King Kai quests that I read. But they were still good

[Minoshia]

How am i RPing in DA? for anyone that just wants to read something check out mine in AREA A, so you can be teh roxors and post here... I feel like im RPing sub-par and i can't put my finger on why, someone help?

[Hellfighter 17]

Better, or worse?

[Hellfighter 17]

I was referring to my latest post. -_-

[Burter]

Rate each other, yeesh. That'll solve everyone's problem. If you want to get feedback, give some

[Hellfighter 17]

Well, for Minoshia I like the posts, maybe he feels as though he doesn't have much character building for himself.

[Ruhiel]

Could someone give me a feeling on if I need to do a little more to my post in the KC vs. 20 and Zarbon fight? I don't want either of us to die, and if we aren't gonna, I know we'll need to rp pretty good.

[The Not Cool Not Tapion]

Minoshia feels like he's doing crappy. And I have to agree his skills are losing what they used to...13 is good.


I can't RP worth crap ever since that huge post in the Archers quest. What will I ever do?