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to a dying lover
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I can't remember the faces I saw. But I can remember their voices piercing my darkness. "Wake up." They called. But I would not return. I remained there, in that forest of lights. Reds and yellows swirled past. Birds chasing some far off dream. I caught a feather as we passed a streetlight. I sewed my own dreams onto the feather and return it to the wind. It would not reach the ocean.


A brick falls from a rooftop, the earth shakes as life crumbles. It was in this night we crossed paths. I remember your name but always chose to forget it. You offered me a drink and I carefully sipped. As you taunted from this side of the ice.

We slipped down the wall and kissed the hardwood. It was a crystal clear reflection: Our lives. I wiped the dirt and decay with your solvent tears.

The mail arrived and I recieved your invitation. Addressed: To my love. We joined together in vacuous love. It was each other we needed not. I bought you a ring and you bought me a jacket. We watched them play.

We kissed and found nothing in each other. I filled you with my dying breath. You filled me with your cigarette smoke. I took back my ring and you took back your jacket. Your eyes still empty.

Pealed up concrete and made a home, within a cold dark heart. Here I waited for your warm touch. I waited for your call, "Wake up.". But I would not return.
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#2
;( Jesus Christ Koola....I'm speechless.
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#3
Well done, Koola, well done. Its very poetical.
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#4
hey. thank you guys.
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#5
It displayed the meaning very will I find. Nicely done, Kuura.
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#6
That was really profound... and sad. Nice job.
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#7
Thank you for that, Koola. Best piece I've read in a long while.
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#8
Aww thats sweet.
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#9
yeah thanks
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#10
I give up. You win.

*drinks*
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