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Ruhiel Offline
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10-23-2006, 02:35 AM
What grade are you in at the moment?
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10-23-2006, 02:37 AM
Going by his age, I'd say 12th grade?
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10-23-2006, 02:43 AM
Your teacher's nice.
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10-23-2006, 02:46 AM
Depends on your class level. If it's an AP English class, yeah, that sucker is a C, or maybe even a D (and in some cases, that's a U/F, I'm afraid). Sorry, but that's how it goes in those classes. I know, I'm in one, and my teacher enjoys giving me them. 'Course, that's for poetry writing and analysis, and I personally hate poetry with a burning passion (I find it pointless and stupid), so that causes some problems.

However, if it's not an AP course, that really shouldn't be a C paper. If it was your final draft, then yeah, it could merit a C. It's got some errors, and doesn't have much coherency. However, if it's a first or revised draft, then no, that's not fair at all. That should be at least a B, minimum, for a first draft. However, if it was a final... yeah, I'd have to agree. Especially in junior year.

Sorry if that wasn't the answer you wanted to hear. Sad
But that's just how our lovely educational system works.
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10-23-2006, 02:48 AM
Badly structured.
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10-23-2006, 02:52 AM
Well, free-range mainly means like what point of view, characters, setting, storyline, that kinda stuff, but as far as writing quality, I doubt she'd not care about that.
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10-23-2006, 03:05 AM
Quote:Originally posted by TAFKA Olibu
I'm in comp >< So yea, I guess I should'a put more effort into it. And no, thats my rough draft I had on my computer. I just find it irritating when she gives us free range but actually has things she's looking for ><

Literature or Language AP? If it's Literature, I envy you. I'd love to write anything prose or short story related. I haven't gotten to do any creative writing inside school since... lemme think... 7th grade. Yep. My class makes me wish Shakespeare had died young. Which makes me mad, because I used to like Shakespeare. >.<

But yeah, for an AP class, you probably should have put some more into it. Free-range, yeah, the idea you had was original. However, the whole story looked like you rushed it, perhaps. Or, if you're like me, did it in the 5 minutes before class. =P
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